Showing posts with label Where Love Once Lived. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Where Love Once Lived. Show all posts
Thursday, December 22, 2016
Monday, November 14, 2016
Four Bookmobile Books Discounted
I scheduled four of my popular Bookmobile books for the Kindle discount promotion. Unfortunately, I forgot to tell anyone. Although there is still time to send out announcements, I didn't want you to have to go to four different places to find them all. So, they're all listed below with dates and savings. Pick any or all.
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Books
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Discount
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Murder in Sun City
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$3.99
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$0.99
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12/31/2016
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The Vengeance Squad
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$3.99
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$0.99
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11/20/2016
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The Vengeance Squad Goes to England
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$3.99
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$0.99
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11/21/2016
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Where Love Once Lived
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$3.99
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$0.99
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11/20/2016
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Tuesday, August 25, 2015
Beginnings that Grab the Reader and Carry Her Along to the Last Page.
I
gave a talk in Mexia, Texas about my writing journey. It seems everywhere I go
there are people who want to write a book. In this group of 12-15, three were
writing. I told them how I got started, the classes I took, the organizations I
belong to, and the importance of joining a critique group.
I
also talked about ways to organize a novel to keep the reader interested from
start to finish. This lead to a discussion of the importance of the first
scene. Writers tend to start the book a few pages, sometimes chapters, before
the action begins. In my first book, Where
Love Once Lived, I stripped off page after page of the beginning while at
the Yosemite Writers' Conference preparing to read from my work in process the
next day.
I
did more stripping and editing when I got home. Here's what I ended up with:
Karen felt loved on Tuesdays.
She was fifty-three and divorced with a
college-aged daughter at home who’d probably flee the nest soon, leaving
Karen to live alone. She’d missed her chance for happiness. Still, she wasn’t
sad. Teaching and her volunteer work as a lay minister, hospital chaplain,
and member of her church choir fulfilled her. To be honest, she wanted more.
She wanted the special kind of love she felt on Tuesdays.
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My
second novel, The Vengeance Squad, is written in first person with a young male
protagonist. There is a prologue, too short to warrant chapter formatting,
which I placed above the Chapter One beginning. See how this grabs you. Would
you want to read more?
The
prologue gives us a glimpse into the future and, hopefully, a desire to know
what happens. The first paragraph of Chapter One gives the reader an
understanding of how in love the narrator is.
Love
Lives On,
my third novel, is a sequel to Where
Love Once Lived. It also ties in some of the characters from The Vengeance Squad. I don't call
them sequels because each will stand alone. However, I think readers would
enjoy them more if the books are read in chronological order.
Here's
how Love Lives On
begins:
Karen Williams was fifty-four and divorced for so
long she'd given up hope for that special marriage everyone talked about, but
few probably had experienced. Then, a year ago, her life changed. Her college
sweetheart charged back into her life, acting as if he'd never stopped loving
her. He was waiting for her at the altar now as she touched up her makeup in
the bride's room of her church.
She
hurried to apply mascara, but her right hand wouldn't be still. The pencil
hit the table with a soft clunk. Tears followed. Tears from nowhere. A glance
into the mirror showed mascara running down both cheeks. What was happening?
Was
it that feeling of unworthiness that crept in when she least expected it?
Couldn't be. God had forgiven her long ago, but she would never forget what
had happened. Second thoughts? Definitely not. She loved Brian and he loved
her. He would never do anything to hurt her. Not again.
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This
excerpt is a little longer because the backstory was necessary to remind
readers of the last book or to introduce Karen to new readers. It was her
wedding day. Why was she crying? What did she do that caused her to need God's
forgiveness? What had Brian done before to hurt her? Will the wedding go on as
scheduled?
Presenting
questions at the beginning will cause the reader to seek answers by continuing
to read.
My fourth novel, The
Vengeance Squad Goes to England begins this way:
Tex
removed his ten-gallon cowboy hat, swiped his brow and leaned back in his
wheelchair to get his hug. I stood behind him knowing I'd be next. But
nothing happened. Liz sat at the end of the conference table with her head in
her hands.
My
friend and former computer science student, Tex Thompson, locked his eyes on
mine and I stared back at him in disbelief. Something was wrong. Liz Siedo,
the happiest librarian in the world, the person who accepted God's will in
every situation and hugged everyone who came within five feet of her, was
either sick or depressed.
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When
I give talks, I tell people not to try to write the perfect beginning before
finishing the rest of chapter one. If you do, you'll never finish the book.
Write the whole thing and then come back and rewrite the first chapter. Often,
my characters have something to say about the endings and the results lead to
the need to make changes to the beginning. For example, when I wrote Murder in
Sun City I didn't know who the killer was until I was halfway through the book.
This caused a need to change the beginning. Here's the original opening:
"Liz!
Are you okay?"
I
looked up at Margie and wondered if I was. I wiggled around before I
answered. "Nothing seems to be broken. I guess I'm lucky I landed on my
God-made cushion."
I
could tell Margie was amused by my comment because she was clearly trying not
to make light of my mishap. So I laughed to let her know it was okay. I'd
never been embarrassed by my ample bottom and was rather pleased with the way
it broke my fall today. I wished I hadn't left my coat in the bookmobile, but
it was such a short walk to Sharon's house.
Margie
laughed. "Well that's good to hear. When I saw you slipping and sliding
on that iced driveway, I knew you'd end up falling. "Watching you throw books
into the air like that was the funniest thing I've seen in some time. Then
she sobered. "I'm sorry. I shouldn't be laughing at your fall."
"That's
okay. Glad to brighten your day. Besides, I'm not hurt. Just not sure how to
get up."
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Besides
the unexpected turn of events as I got into the book, there were other reasons
to change this beginning. It just didn't grab me.
I
should explain that this is the first in the so-called bookmobile series where
the reader sees things through Liz's eyes. If you've read the other books, you
know she is large, but happy and confident. So this beginning is to let you
know she sees herself the same way other people see her. It's okay, but it is
irrelevant to the story. It doesn't ask questions. It doesn't cause the reader
to want to keep reading. Hopefully, the revision below does:
Margie was waiting on the icy driveway as I parked
the bookmobile in front of Sharon's house. Had she been crying?
I
climbed out and gave her a hug. "Are you okay?"
She
held on a little longer than usual. "I'm okay."
I
pushed away and looked into her eyes. "Something's wrong. You've been
crying."
"No."
She brushed at her eyes with a gloved hand. "Must be from the cold."
I
knew she needed to talk. "Why don't you wait in
the bookmobile and get warm? I brought those books you asked for."
"Okay."
Margie didn't look at me as she spoke. "I guess you should see Sharon
first."
I
stepped into the library and picked up the five books I'd brought for Sharon
and a white paper bag.
Margie
moved back to give me space. "What's in the bag?"
"Some
scones for Sharon. I got them at the library coffee shop while I was loading
books this morning."
"Scones?"
"Hey. Come with
me." I held up the bag. "Carry this for me. I've got enough for all
of us." |
I
will probably change this more before it is published, but I think this works
better. What do you think?
If
you are a reader only or a writer and reader, check some of your favorite books
and see if the magic began on page one.
I
talked about this in a previous post where I included the openings of some
Pulitzer Prize winners. See Pulitzer
Prize First Sentences. Some are better than others. What do you think?
Would you read the books based on beginnings, or only because it won the
Pulitzer Prize?
Thursday, August 20, 2015
Sales for Where Love Once Lived Exceed ONE THOUSAND!
The total number of sales for Where Love Once Lived, including paperbacks and e-books, just got
into the four digits.
I know. That's not much compared to sales for many books.
However, when you think about the statistic that shows most independently
published books sell less than 100 copies, it looks pretty good. I don't know
where I read that, but the reasoning was that everyone has a least 100 friends
and family members who will buy their book.
Another consideration is that my goal has always been to
reach people with my Christian message. So, I can also count the 64,000+ copies
of this book that have been given away during Kindle free days to readers in
ten countries.
Thanks to everyone who bought a copy and helped me reach
this milestone.
To see more information, go to Amazon.com.
To see more information, go to Amazon.com.
Sunday, May 5, 2013
More Reader Mail
Wanda
A. -- I loved the book (Where Love Once
Lived). It made me cry. I have been in a relationship for twenty one years and
we are still not married. It gave me hope that everything is possible with God's
help. We just need to be reminded. Thanks for reminding me. Please keep
writing. Send me an email at xxx with any of your other books. Thanks again!
Wanda
Sent from my Kindle Fire
Facebook
– I just finished your book
"Where Love Once Lived", it drew my interest because my husband and I
me on the bookmobile – He was the driver and I was the patron. Thanks for
sharing this wonderful story. I met him 33 years ago in Pasadena, TX it was
love at first sight and still going.
Email
from Reader – I am reading The
Vengeance Squad now and am enjoying it. Having lived in Austin/Pflugerville/RR
26 for years, I can picture the scenes. As a cradle Episcopalian now Anglican,
I relate as well.
Good job, Sid.
Email
from Reader – I really
enjoyed your book (Where Love Once Lived). Very inspirational.
Thank you.
Faye
H -- Mr. Frost I just finished
reading your book. I have to say it was WONDERFUL! I loved it so
much and I am so glad I chose it. There were so many things in the book,
passages, scripture, prayers, and good clear thinking that it helped me so
much. I love books that are romantic and Christian. I also love sci
fi books, magic, fairy tales etc.
You did an amazing job on this book and I will recommend it to anyone
and everyone. Thanks again for making my day!!!
Pat
C. – Just wanted you
to know that I read your new book "Love Lives On" and really enjoyed
it. Didn't know so much could happen to one couple! Thanks for letting me know
about it.
Peg C.
– (re Love Lives On) A quick read and a real page turner! I enjoyed the ongoing suspense and the way
everything was resolved.
Saturday, May 4, 2013
Love Lives On – The Reviews Are In!
There are 54 reviews for the prequel, Where Love Once Lived, and they are
still coming in. Those are much more varied than the eight five-star reviews
received so far for Love Lives On.
However, I'm sure we'll see a variety of reviews for the new book as time goes
by.
Here's what we have so far on
Amazon.com:
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Jim
C. -- My reading had pretty much been
confined to books about investing, computers, or medical science. That all
changed when I learned about the books written by Sid Frost. I have just
completed reading his most recent work Love
Lives On. The story is quite interesting and I really enjoy the way that he
uses real places from the Austin area and his use of characters that we have
gotten to know from his previous books. The mystery and surprises keep coming,
right up to the final page.
Lisa
L. -- What I love about Sid's work is
that he explores relationships between older people. How do those of us
experience life from the point of having "been there and done that"?
We approach life with certain expectations and experiences, and when we embark
on a new relationship, how do we meld what we are with another person? And when
crises hit, as they inevitably do, how do we chose to allow our spouse to help
us, or can we learn to respond in a new way?
Love
Lives On pulls together
characters from Sid's other series to help Karen and Brian when she's sued in
an emotionally and financially-draining frivolous lawsuit immediately after the
wedding ceremony. Karen and Brian must figure out how to work together when
aspects of the lawsuit become threatening to their physical welfare, as well as
when an unexpected health crisis strikes Brian's family. I loved their
honeymoon in Europe - I felt like I was there with them. Sid allows both Karen
and Brian to tell the story from their perspectives. There's drama, there's
romance, there's barbecue, there's danger and excitement...what's not to love?
Sid's story-telling comes from his
personal experiences which he lovingly transfers to his characters. Karen and
Brian are real people who learn to rely on each other besides the God whom they
both trust. Don't we all want a piece of that?
Laura
N. -- A sequel to Where Love Once Lived was highly
anticipated by me. Being curious as I am, I simply had to know what would be
happening in the characters' lives. Love
Lives On answered the questions in my mind, with humor, a bit of romance
and much mystery. Sidney blended the stories and characters into an exciting
novel.
The occurrences in Love Lives On are very "real to life", and I am sure most readers will find themselves somewhere in the book; most could happen to anyone in one form or another. Yet, the manner which Sidney wrote this story, had me sitting on the "edge of my chair" at times. The characters blended so well; some the reader will like, dislike or plain "yell out loud" at the nasty things they may do or say.
Love Lives On brings hope, love, forgiveness and faith to the reader. I highly recommend this book, and anticipate the continuing adventure of Karen and Brian in the next novel.
The occurrences in Love Lives On are very "real to life", and I am sure most readers will find themselves somewhere in the book; most could happen to anyone in one form or another. Yet, the manner which Sidney wrote this story, had me sitting on the "edge of my chair" at times. The characters blended so well; some the reader will like, dislike or plain "yell out loud" at the nasty things they may do or say.
Love Lives On brings hope, love, forgiveness and faith to the reader. I highly recommend this book, and anticipate the continuing adventure of Karen and Brian in the next novel.
B.J. -- You'll
want to read both novels Where Love Once
Lived and Love Lives On. Though
both books can be read alone, if you're like me, you'll want to know more about
what happens to the characters. I love series. You first meet Karen in Where Love Once Lived along with other
characters who show up in Love Lives On
as friends who help her in her time of need.
Love Lives On evoked
emotions and made me laugh and cry at times. About midway, I didn't want to
stop reading because I wanted to see what happened, and I had to make myself
put down the book and go to bed with only five remaining chapters, which I
quickly finished at my next opportunity. Karen's life becomes endangered and so
do others as they try to help her, especially her friend, Cathy.
I loved the way the ending wove together for a surprise with
forgiveness and God's purpose, as Karen insisted on discovering. While she
could have chosen to throw money at problems to make them disappear as her new
husband Brian offered to do more than once, she refused to do so because she
wanted to know the whys and God's purpose. Why did God allow her to be sued?
What possible good could come out of it? I won't include spoilers, but I'll
just say that much good overcame evil.
I also loved how the author illustrated how easy it sometimes is
to con trusting or vulnerable women. There's more than one surprise in this
work of art. There is foreshadowing along the way.
This novel takes you on an adventure and a journey. I've never
read one about Germany, a place I've never been. I found the places visited on
their honeymoon interesting. To describe Love
Lives On in a sentence, I'd say Love
Lives On is a novel of love, learning to trust, and forgiveness. The ending
was touching, and I loved it. There are some page-turning exciting incidents
along the way as well. Grab both reads and enjoy them as I did.
Chris G. -- Love Lives On is a very surprising book
with many unexpected twists in it. And of course it has the bookmobile in it,
and the Squad in it. And a very unusual love story.
In a few places the story got confusing to me. The overall story was fast paced, suspenseful, and a great read.
In a few places the story got confusing to me. The overall story was fast paced, suspenseful, and a great read.
Rollo N. -- Although
this book is clearly a continuation of Frost's earlier Where Love Once Lived and brings back some characters from The Vengeance Squad it is a fully
complete stand-alone novel. In the first few episodes of Love Lives On the story itself quickly and thoroughly introduces
main characters, establishes the setting and sets the tone and pace (fast) for
the novel. But, for anyone who enjoyed the first two this new one will be an
absolute delight.
To avoid giving anything away I'm not going to comment on the plot's twists, turns and surprises but I do want to observe that the writing is solid throughout and the dialogs are exceptionally effective. Character's fears, aspirations, intentions, attractions and feelings are often revealed by what the characters do and say. Rarely does the narrator tell us what the actors' motivations or expectations are. In general the verbal interactions are natural, believable and totally in character. A consequence of this is a tendency for the reader to forget they are reading and to just absorb the story. Speaking as a reader that is great fun.
To avoid giving anything away I'm not going to comment on the plot's twists, turns and surprises but I do want to observe that the writing is solid throughout and the dialogs are exceptionally effective. Character's fears, aspirations, intentions, attractions and feelings are often revealed by what the characters do and say. Rarely does the narrator tell us what the actors' motivations or expectations are. In general the verbal interactions are natural, believable and totally in character. A consequence of this is a tendency for the reader to forget they are reading and to just absorb the story. Speaking as a reader that is great fun.
Carol
B. -- I loved this book! What
a fun combination to put romance and thriller together!
The romance part was very sweet. I thought Sid did a wonderful job of dealing with the real life reactions and issues a couple in their "mature years" would encounter--aging parents, children on their own, crazy ex-partners all while trying to have a honeymoon! He skillfully helps the reader feel the tension of the main characters as they put their college romance back together after a 30 year separation. A separation that was unnecessary if they had only talked to each other at the time!
You worry with them over things not said that should have been--an old pattern they both want not to follow them into this relationship. You feel the angst of trying to protect each other. Both main characters are aware of their knee jerk reactions and the effects on the other and yet, it still happens. Sid effortlessly weaves their faith into the dialogue so that it adds to the overall story. I appreciated that forgiveness, kindness, thoughtfulness and faith was consistent throughout their daily lives; it wasn't just a Sunday thing or turned to only in an emergency.
The thriller part? It kept me coming back. :) Just when you think life is going to settle and they can major on the romance another curve ball! And isn't that life? You can't leave Karen hanging upside down in her seatbelt! You have to know how all this crazy stalking ends so these people can have their honeymoon!
The writing -- It is a good writer who can put you in his characters shoes so that you feel their experiences! The action kept going. Secondary characters received adequate development so that you felt you knew them as well, and maybe even understood them in a way. I didn't feel the story line ever went flat and the editing was excellent. You pulled for the good guys and wanted to put the bad guys away! A nice ending leaves you wondering if there is one more coming.
It's an excellent read for those who like thrillers, or romance or both! I will be recommending Sid as an author. Everything he has written has been well done. I give it 5 stars!
The romance part was very sweet. I thought Sid did a wonderful job of dealing with the real life reactions and issues a couple in their "mature years" would encounter--aging parents, children on their own, crazy ex-partners all while trying to have a honeymoon! He skillfully helps the reader feel the tension of the main characters as they put their college romance back together after a 30 year separation. A separation that was unnecessary if they had only talked to each other at the time!
You worry with them over things not said that should have been--an old pattern they both want not to follow them into this relationship. You feel the angst of trying to protect each other. Both main characters are aware of their knee jerk reactions and the effects on the other and yet, it still happens. Sid effortlessly weaves their faith into the dialogue so that it adds to the overall story. I appreciated that forgiveness, kindness, thoughtfulness and faith was consistent throughout their daily lives; it wasn't just a Sunday thing or turned to only in an emergency.
The thriller part? It kept me coming back. :) Just when you think life is going to settle and they can major on the romance another curve ball! And isn't that life? You can't leave Karen hanging upside down in her seatbelt! You have to know how all this crazy stalking ends so these people can have their honeymoon!
The writing -- It is a good writer who can put you in his characters shoes so that you feel their experiences! The action kept going. Secondary characters received adequate development so that you felt you knew them as well, and maybe even understood them in a way. I didn't feel the story line ever went flat and the editing was excellent. You pulled for the good guys and wanted to put the bad guys away! A nice ending leaves you wondering if there is one more coming.
It's an excellent read for those who like thrillers, or romance or both! I will be recommending Sid as an author. Everything he has written has been well done. I give it 5 stars!
L. Scribbler -- In Love Lives On, the second in the
Christian Bookmobiles series, Sidney W. Frost continues to develop the story of
star-crossed lovers Brian Donelson and Karen Williams introduced in Where Love Once Lived. Problems arise in
the opening pages at Brian and Karen's wedding. An unexpected lawsuit awakens
unhappy memories in Karen's past, and dealing with it causes conflict in their
new marriage. A mysterious photographer trails them on their honeymoon; the
driver of a black pickup terrorizes Karen. The suspense continues to build to a
satisfying climax. Frost has the knack of moving the plot along with both
mysterious and humorous incidents. His characters leap from the pages as real
people with distinct personalities. Brian and Karen, two intelligent, loving,
devoutly Christian, yet flawed individuals, have the maddening propensity for
failing to share vital information in a professed effort to "protect"
each other. Brian must come to accept Karen's desire to be independent, to
follow her sense of what God is telling her. Members of the Combine and Liz,
the lovable librarian, are back, along with Liz's team from Frost's The Vengeance Squad. Though written as a
sequel, Love Lives On stands alone as
a thoroughly entertaining read.
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Thanks everyone. These review were all
five stars and all warmed my heart and gave me new insights into the story. I've
also received a number of emails praising the book. I'll post those later.
Wednesday, May 1, 2013
What Readers Say About the Bookmobile Series
There are three Christian Bookmobile books now: Where Love Once Lived (2010), The Vengeance Squad (2011) and Love Lives On (2013). Although some of the same characters appear in each book, I tried to write each one to be complete within itself.
However, if you
want to keep a strict timeline, read them in the order shown above. Where Love Once Lived and Love Lives On have the same main
characters. The second book begins where the first one ended. The Vengeance Squad has a different main
character. However, Liz, the librarian is prominent in all three books. Love Lives On has some scenes with Chris
and Tex from The Vengeance Squad.
Based on early
reviews of Love Lives On, readers
seem to like to read more about the characters from the first two bookmobile
books.
Laura: A sequel to Where Love Once Lived was highly
anticipated by me. Being curious as I am, I simply had to know what would be
happening in the characters' lives. Love Lives On answered the questions in my
mind, with humor, a bit of romance and much mystery. Sidney blended the stories
and characters into an exciting novel.
B.J.: You'll want to read both novels Where Love
Once Lived and Love Lives on. Though both books can be read alone, if you're
like me, you'll want to know more about what happens to the characters. I love
series. You first meet Karen in Where Love Once Lived along with other
characters who show up in Love Lives on as friends who help her in her time of
need.
Christina: Love Lives On is a very surprising book
with many unexpected twists in it, And of course it has the bookmobile in it,
and the Squad in it.
Rollo: Although this book is clearly a
continuation of Frost's earlier Where Love Once Lived and brings back some
characters from The Vengeance Squad it is a fully complete stand-alone novel.
Longtime Scribbler: In "Love Lives
On", the second in the Christian Bookmobiles series, Sidney W. Frost
continues to develop the story of star-crossed lovers Brian Donelson and Karen
Williams introduced in "Where Love Once Lived"…Members of the Combine
and Liz, the lovable librarian, are back, along with Liz's team from Frost's
"The Vengeance Squad." Though written as a sequel, "Love Lives
On" stands alone as a thoroughly entertaining read.
By Joy: Readers who appreciate characters who live
by Christian values will enjoy this love story that follows the author's first
novel WHERE LOVE ONCE LIVED, and its unfolding mystery. Women may be surprised
by this male author's apparent understanding of the female perspective. Men may
gain insight into that which has long been found puzzling to their gender. I enjoyed reading a proof copy of this novel
and even more the published one with its beautiful and intriguing cover.
I hope you will
all read Love Lives On.
Tuesday, January 1, 2013
Shared Notes and Highlights Delightful
I ran across something new to
me today while reading the Amazon listing for my book, Where Love Once Lived.
Way down on the screen, almost to the bottom, for the Kindle edition, there was
a section headed: Shared Notes and Highlights. It consists of notes and
highlights entered by readers. I've noticed this on some books when I've read
them, but this is the first time I had seen any for one of my books.
There were several notes from
readers such as:
Awesome book.
Great book
GREAT BOOK
Another reader had highlighted on the
Bible references at the beginning of the book: “Whether you turn to the right
or to the left, your ears will hear a voice behind you, saying, ‘This is the
way; walk in it.’” —Isaiah 30:21, and added "The only way to do it..."
Another
highlighted this Bible reference: “For if you forgive others their trespasses,
your heavenly Father will also forgive you; but if you do not forgive others,
neither will your Father forgive your trespasses.” —Matthew 6:14-15.
The
reader's Amazon name is included and the date, in time since the entry was
made.
On
the right side of the page is the Popular
Highlights section. This shows the part of the book highlighted and the
number of people who highlighted it. Here are some examples:
“In
my seventy-eight years on this earth, I learned it’s always best to tell the
truth.” He paused as if thinking that over. “Well, there’s no need to hurt
people’s feelin’s, if we can help it, but we should never lie to someone or
hide somethin’ from someone. Especially someone who loves you.”
“I think Cindy’s smart enough
to pick the right guy. I don’ care what color he is. That’s what equality
means.”
“Diversity separates the
races. It highlights and emphasizes the differences. I sometimes think maybe
Phil and Kay’s gen’ration has been brainwashed with all that political
correctness garbage. Just follow the good Lord and love one another.”
You wouldn’t take credit for
the good things he does, so why take credit for his bad choices?
“Dear God, I need You. I
guess I always have, but I was too stubborn to admit it. I hope it’s not too
late. Your love once lived deeply within me, and I took that love for granted.
I am empty and alone with burdens I can’t handle.”
‘May you trust God that
you’re exactly where you’re meant to be.’
“Dear Lord,” she said, “watch
over Your servant, Brian, today and every day. Help him to feel Your calming
presence and know You’re always with him. Give him hope and guide him to the
place where You want him to be. Bring love back into his heart. Amen.”
“The answer to prayer could
be an idea that pops into your head or a comment you hear in a crowd.”
You can also get to these
notes and highlights on your Kindle or Kindle reader software. In addition, you
can log into https://kindle.amazon.com/
and search for a particular books. My other book, The Vengeance Squad did not have any notes and highlights.
Saturday, December 29, 2012
Book Reviews--The Good and the Bad
One of the results of free-Kindle days is that more people get
copies of my books and along with that more reviews are posted. That's great as
long as the books get into the right hands. Some people take a book because it
is free and then find it is not the type of book they like. In these cases the
reviews are not so great.
However,
most recently, the so-called bad reviews have been simply the readers' honest
opinion of the books. Yes, the negative ones hurt. Especially when readers
criticize something and I know they are wrong. For example one review for Where Love Once Loved posted on Goodreads
said "POV bounced around too much -- sometimes within the same
paragraph."
This book was written as a romance where point of view (POV) alternates between the male and the female protagonist, but never in the same
scene much less in the same paragraph. I consider myself somewhat an expert
when it comes to POV, having studied under Bonnie Hearn Hill. I felt like
adding a comment to the review challenging the reviewer to show an example of
POV switch in a paragraph But, I didn't, and I won't. Besides, most
readers don't care about POV switch. Just read any John Gresham book. Makes me
wonder if the reviewer is a writer.
The same reader said there were too many
characters and too many subplots, and criticized the actions of some of the
characters. She was even annoyed by the George McCullough character. This
particular character spoke for me, the author. He is my age. He has my
memories. He has my history. The only difference is that he is black and I'm
not. He was also the strong Christian influence in the book. I wonder if that
is what annoyed the snot out of the reader.
Many other readers love the characters and
marvel at the way I was able to include so many. But, still, I know what the
reviewer meant. From a traditional publishing formula romance, the book is a
failure. I worked with a publisher before independently publishing and I know
what they want. I cut some subplots, but I couldn't cut them all. Perhaps the
book would have been better if I had. Or, as the reviewer said, write separate
books for each subplot.
I may do that. That is, write separate books.
The sequel is more about Karen. I thinking of another book about Liz or Josh
and Cindy or Tony. Liz's story is actually continued in The Vengeance Squad and
the unfinished sequel I call The Vengeance Squad Goes to England.
I appreciate every review and every comment.
Good or Bad.
Here are some of the more recent ones for THE VENGEANCE SQUAD:
1 of 1 people found the following review helpful
4.0 out of 5 stars the vengeance squad, December 19, 2012
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Kathy Akers (Harold, Kentucky, US) - See all my reviews
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Very good book. You can almost feel the emotions of this young man. I'm glad it ended like it did. God is always with you!
1 of 1 people found the following review helpful
4.0 out of 5 stars Great read!, December 20, 2012
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Captivating and hard to put down, I could see myself thinking like the main character and seeking revenge. The author does a great job developing the characters and putting them together, as different as they are, to do amazing things.
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5.0 out of 5 stars Great read!, December 20, 2012
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I thoroughly enjoyed this book from beginning to end. I was surprised that it was so good since it isn't a well known book and I haven't found many of those. It kept me reading it all day and all night until I finished it! I could not wait to see what happened from one chapter to the next. I would highly recommend reading this book if you like to be on the edge of your seat!
1 of 1 people found the following review helpful
5.0 out of 5 stars A good read. Held my interest all the way to end, December 23, 2012
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You need to read this book for a look at what God can do in your life and the test of his will
1 of 1 people found the following review helpful
5.0 out of 5 stars Great book, December 27, 2012
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Great book. Well Written. Very believable characters. Shows how one can get mad at God after losing somebody and How God can bring you back. Sid Frost might be a new writer, but he is a great suspense writer. God bless you
Here are some of the more recent ones for WHERE LOVE ONCE LIVED:
1 of 1 people found the following review helpful
4.0 out of 5 stars WHERE LOVE ONCE LIVED, December 20, 2012
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LOVE FULFILLED - WHAT A WONDERFUL ACCOUNT AND THE ENDING WAS SO SWEET. SIDNEY FROST DID A GOOD JOB ON THIS ONE
1.0 out of 5 stars not so good, December 22, 2012
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I am fairly easily entertained, but found this book hard to read, with details coming after the statements - as if an afterthought. The amount of drama sustained by the characters was also brought across not very believably. I like the story concept and the characters, but felt the story was told poorly, as if this was a first attempt by an immature writer.
1 of 1 people found the following review helpful
3.0 out of 5 stars Purchased on kindle free, December 23, 2012
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It was pretty good. Tasteful. Held my. Interest would a good book for my granddaughters to read. Liked that it was based on scriptural vales.
1 of 1 people found the following review helpful
5.0 out of 5 stars Good Book, December 27, 2012
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Shows the bumpy road to going back to your true love. How our secrets can get in the way How our Lord can always be with us even when we are doubting.God bless you
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